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snoopy79
08-17-2008, 05:46 PM
Abandoned House & Harbor Wagon

Went to an area where there are abandoned things like this house and wagon from the world war II.

All comments and criticism welcome.

Snoopy
www.flickr.com/franzel

1. Old Harbor Wagon and dock
http://internet.is/franzeric/mynd/IMG_1916-1917-straighten2-800.jpg


2. Same as picture #1, different composure and some photoshop experiments.
http://internet.is/franzeric/mynd/HDR2-old2-800.jpg


3. Abandoned Soldier House
http://internet.is/franzeric/mynd/IMG_1926-drungaleg-redyna20-800.jpg

snoopy79
08-17-2008, 05:47 PM
I took a another picture of the abandoned house with a different composure, here is the outcome.

4. Path To The Abandoned Soldier House
http://internet.is/franzeric/mynd/IMG_1928-drunga-800.jpg

marshall2
08-17-2008, 06:32 PM
Great work Snoopy, some really nice images here. I really like what you've done to the second version of the first shot. The overall treatment gives it a really old, wartime feel.

In the second shot, I like the stillness and sharpness of the main subject, and the gentle blowing of the grass.

The final shot, I really like the composition. The house being partially hidden by the hill, and the inclusion of the path gives a feeling of mystery and suspense. The moody sky only adds to these feelings. The path also adds strength to the image as it leads the eye through the shot.

Skippy
08-18-2008, 06:19 AM
Ominous feeling pictures.

Skippy

alanw
08-18-2008, 08:33 AM
Interesting shots Snoopy. I like the 1st version of the wagon and the rework of the abandoned house.

Reflection
08-18-2008, 08:36 AM
Beautyfull images, I like the first images a lot better then your edit. Both 3&4 are great. Great use of leeding lines in the 4th image.

Calnumismatist
08-18-2008, 08:47 AM
I really like #1 and 4. The composition is well done.

TonyBB
08-18-2008, 08:57 AM
You're getting a consensus here Snoopy - 1 & 4 for sure. Better compositions and colour.

Regards, Tony

Landis
08-18-2008, 09:06 AM
Definitely #1 for me.

:twak: Only THREE photos per thread, please.