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    Location: Dorset, United Kingdom, 2010
    Equipment: Nikon D200, Nikkor 50/1.8, 30s at f8, ISO 100, 50mm






    Thanks in advance for any comments.


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    I really like this technique, and will now look into trying it based upon the results you have demonstrated.

    I think I read something before, not sure if it was your post, regarding ND filters. I have two that are both 90% or so, so that will be a start.

    As to this specific image, one thing I see it it right away is how the outline of the rock is copied in the lower line of the cloud. That symmetry is an important part of the visual effect, at least for me. Also, the B&W tones are good for me.

    That said, though this is not in the critique forum, there is something missing to my eye. Not sure what, exactly. Perhaps it is too centered, both horizontally and vertically; sort of as if it isn't coming from somewhere, going to somewhere, but is more sort of like the ship in the Rime of the Ancient Mariner when the sails couldn't catch the wind.

    I apologize for not being able to give you a constructive criticism for improving it, and it may not need improvement at all in others' eyes. It is a very nice image, but it has a very static effect upon my mind when I view it. OK?

    Take care and thanks for posting.
    "'There's more to a picture than meets the eye; hey, hey; my my." - Neil Young


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    This is a beautiful image. Terrific photography!


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    Quote Originally Posted by chicagojohn View Post
    I really like this technique, and will now look into trying it based upon the results you have demonstrated.

    I think I read something before, not sure if it was your post, regarding ND filters. I have two that are both 90% or so, so that will be a start.

    As to this specific image, one thing I see it it right away is how the outline of the rock is copied in the lower line of the cloud. That symmetry is an important part of the visual effect, at least for me. Also, the B&W tones are good for me.

    That said, though this is not in the critique forum, there is something missing to my eye. Not sure what, exactly. Perhaps it is too centered, both horizontally and vertically; sort of as if it isn't coming from somewhere, going to somewhere, but is more sort of like the ship in the Rime of the Ancient Mariner when the sails couldn't catch the wind.

    I apologize for not being able to give you a constructive criticism for improving it, and it may not need improvement at all in others' eyes. It is a very nice image, but it has a very static effect upon my mind when I view it. OK?

    Take care and thanks for posting.
    Thank you.

    I wanted to show some minimalist shot and simplicity! That was a goal .

    Thanks again.


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    While I like the image
    It doesn't really achieve the objective of simplicity in my mind either.

    The reason for this is complicated by the surface of the rock.

    I'm just sayin...

    It's a nice image, and I'm sure others will love it, but I'm telling you my reaction.
    Last edited by chicagojohn; 06-30-2012 at 03:52 PM.
    "'There's more to a picture than meets the eye; hey, hey; my my." - Neil Young


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    No worries and I appreciate honest feedback! Thank you.


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